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Submitted: 12/23/2008 | 12:53PM EST
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Genre: Action
Current Score: 1.94 / 5.00
224 votes | 1,216 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Fire emblem Lloyd vs lyn my first flash im actualy submiting make any comments u want but its my first one and yeah not that good i couldnt find a bg that matched so i just made a black screen <.<;; . also all credit for the sprites goes to the people who got them.
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Average Score: 5.3 / 10
"Not to bad"
It's not bad for being your first one. Not the greatest 8-bit movie I've seen but it's alright. You need to stop the sound at the end of the movie as it keeps going and if you try to play it again it starts playing it twice at the same time. Do that, add some background and I'd give it a better rating by at least 2 points.
"Pretty good"
Its a little short, and I'm biased, because I'm not an 8-bit fanboy XD.
"Nice try xD"
Keep trying, and you'll get somewhere, make it better cuz this will get blamed probably.
"Way small"
It is very possible and easy to enlarge sprites.
"Quite ok."
It was quite nicely done but it lacked a background and it was too short. You might also want to bring the sprites closer to the screen.
All in all, it was ok, but needs a lot more work.
yeah i know its my first one i actualy decided to post i just wanted to see what tips i can get and ty next one wont suck =D