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Dec 22, 2008 | 9:23 AM EST

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its basically the same as the one i submitted yesterday except its faster, has better text and some new sound, not too much better though. The animation is still mediocre but, with a mouse this is still prtty good. I f you can't hear the gunfire at the beggining turn up your speakers.

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chesster415chesster415

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 29, 2008

Alright for a first timer.

The animation does need work but I understand having hardware limitations.
Next time you could try using some tweening, (There are plenty of tutorials on the internet.) and maybe use a blur filter to show changing focus. And try to add a little more action for ep. 2, you can do gradual scaling wth motion tweens that might help make things look a bit smoother.



zookyman2zookyman2

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 26, 2008

hmmm

it's ok but the animations could use some work. (ps i'm no better ^_^)


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supahkewlsupahkewl

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 22, 2008

This was kewl, but you have stuff to improve

storyline was ok, but you have to improve your style. keep it up!


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Supman914Supman914

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 22, 2008

Wy better than the first

Pretty food now instead of waiting for the reading to pass after i read it i can just press a button nice man


MasteRat133 responds:

ya i was reading about action script, then i realized how is this gonna work, its taking way too long at first. Then when i made this version, the text was too long and the fps was too fast. so i used stop on the frame, then put the play button there for everyone.


NapoezeNapoeze

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 22, 2008

Good but...

the story is great! but you need a better animatin and longer episodes

Good LUCK and waiting for ep. 2;)


MasteRat133 responds:

thnks for the review. I plan on starting episode 2 soon. i already sktched the scenes on paper. and i just need to get the script done, not necesairily dialogue, but how each scene is going to work out. The story only really begins unfolding next episode