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In this episode the grammar is better
Just plain Plain.
New at this? How OLD are you guy? Your spelling is very very bad. Good idea i guess so i'll give you a point for that. The story makes a little bit of sense. With a flash that choppy and plain I'm guessing you're not using a real flash program. It looks like paint or something. If you're really interested in doing something real i'm sure I could provide a link to Flash 8 or something. Those dingbats that gave you anything over a 3 are Nuckin FUTS!
grammar reminds me of AYB
If I recall, you completely changed from the end of the last episode. Didn't they go into space to a different world? What happened to that, this seems totally different altogether.
Anyway, the flash itself desperately needs improvements and you really need to fix your spelling and grammer.
You ended your flash in the middle of a battle. Not before, not after, not during a cliffhanger, but DURING a fight?
Fix your spelling and put some more effort into it for Christ's sake. Sorry to be harsh, but that's the way I see it.
very nicely done
It's not so much an issue w/ grammar as it is WITH SPELLING. Also, the animation was a bit on the slow side. But you still get 5/5 and 10/10 for making a great series. I look forward to seeing more.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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