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This Christmas you better watch out for a purple guy with a chainsaw.
Looked like it was just thrown together.
Not really any plan, or story.
The animation wasn't to bad, but could be fixed.
LOL well that was funny and amusing, maybe abit of subtitles for extra measure, but other then that it was ok, i enjoyed it
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Entertaining clay action
I have to say this the the best you have done. I think this work is going down the right track. You have sped it up so that there's not lot of lag time between lines. That makes the story work better.
short but neat. needs better scenery and more thought tho, and you have to fix those white bars on the sides of the animation. that means you were off when you typed in the pixels for the width. you can fix it by going to your accoint, going to the submission and clicking 'edit' and re-typing the width pixel set. goodluck :P
A short film about a park bench
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