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This is my first flash submission please tell me what you think and if i should make some more. Good and bad comments accepeted.
it was ok
it was good but seein as though ur one of my best frends i hate it lol
im soz if people find me unacceptable but were mates so i dont count lol
ill send u some money from barbados
Not bad for a first submission. Good movement and sounds. Something you might consider is downloading a Newgrounds Preloader for the beginning, and also a Replay Button. They are both very easy, and I don't even know Actionscript! Good luck!
nice, but i thnk there should be a play button or somthing...
For your first flash...
... it isn't bad.It could use some story or something, but of course I'm sure this similar to a test of your skills.The graphics are better than a lot of the high rated 8-bit crap out there.And the audio was crisp, so put a story behind your next sub and you'll be crackin.
A good start
Nice use of expressioning with the eyebrow region, also nice sense of comic turnaround with thefirst object being the harmless one after hearing the beeps, however, it is very short, and doesn't really give viewers the time t realy gain appreciation for the character, also, you did good with a minimalistic approach, nut mure detail is usually required in general for a flash to become successful.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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