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Dec 20, 2008 | 11:53 PM EST

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Second flash, so try not to kill me with your flames :(

Also my first try with voice overs, and my mic is poor quality so... yeah.

Reviews


RapidSmileBombRapidSmileBomb

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2008

good job

for your second try. Keep working on it.... and dude, you could have thought of something better than an IOU

then again.. i dont know if i could myself. comedy is hard



JucomJucom

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2008

Funny, and better than my second flash!

This is a lot like my second. It was a first for lip syncing as well, except it was only two eyes and a circle for a mouth (that grew and shrunk as words were spoken, so that I didnt have to work much).

I liked it, it ran fairly smoothly and the preloader was great.

I'll give you a 5 for effort, and for some of the outcome.



thelittleemothelittleemo

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2008

lol pretty funny

but i think there should be more gifts or somthing....



DawnslayerDawnslayer

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2008

Mediocre

I understand it's your second Flash, but I measure everyone by the same yardstick. If we cut you slack, what would be your motivation to imrpove? :)

In any case, this was rather short, with amateur graphics and not much animation, though I will give you credit for lip synching. The ending itself was a bit disappointing, and not because it was an IOU; you need more of a buildup to make the ending funny. As for the bad mic, you might try taking your recording and adjusting it with a sound mixer; ask around to see if there's any useful techniques.

It wasn't horrible, but it left me wanting. Keep trying.



silverfox11202silverfox11202

Rated 2 / 5 stars December 21, 2008

not all that great

looks really bad, but the voice over is ok.