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Second flash, so try not to kill me with your flames :(
Also my first try with voice overs, and my mic is poor quality so... yeah.
for your second try. Keep working on it.... and dude, you could have thought of something better than an IOU
then again.. i dont know if i could myself. comedy is hard
Funny, and better than my second flash!
This is a lot like my second. It was a first for lip syncing as well, except it was only two eyes and a circle for a mouth (that grew and shrunk as words were spoken, so that I didnt have to work much).
I liked it, it ran fairly smoothly and the preloader was great.
I'll give you a 5 for effort, and for some of the outcome.
lol pretty funny
but i think there should be more gifts or somthing....
I understand it's your second Flash, but I measure everyone by the same yardstick. If we cut you slack, what would be your motivation to imrpove? :)
In any case, this was rather short, with amateur graphics and not much animation, though I will give you credit for lip synching. The ending itself was a bit disappointing, and not because it was an IOU; you need more of a buildup to make the ending funny. As for the bad mic, you might try taking your recording and adjusting it with a sound mixer; ask around to see if there's any useful techniques.
It wasn't horrible, but it left me wanting. Keep trying.
not all that great
looks really bad, but the voice over is ok.
A short film about a park bench
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