Score: 3
"It's difficult to believe it took a team of 3."
date: October 29, 2009
According to the author and file info, it took 3 people to do this... An artist, a writer, and a voiceactor.. Yet the art was poor, the writing was unsatisfactory, and the voice was painful to listen to.
Artist: If I had to describe the art, I'd say, "Rushed". It looks like it was throw together as quickly as possible, like 2 or less weeks week. I think sound advice is to pay more attention to detail, and invest more time in fluid character movements.
Writer: I'd describe the writing the same way: Rushed. The script and songs look like they were each thrown together in a bored afternoon.
Voice: Maybe I'm missing something, as many of the voices sounded so bad, I'm guessing they're SUPPOSED to sound bad. What really annoyed me was the mis-sync of the voices, which shows a lack of communication between the artists, and a laziness in general. Nobody sang their part at the tempo of the song... at the very least you could have taken the voiceclips and edited them in Audacity or some other free, easy to use audio software.
I know this is from late 08, but looking at your latest Pwanchi flash, it's not much better.
