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This is pretty experimental. Just wondering what you guys think of it.
I'm working on a video with an actual story, but I need to know what I need to improve on with my animation and stuff.
music: 9/10 simple mario music always is great.
animation: 7/10 good animation and funny.
movie itself: 6/10 to short, could be a bit longer to really make it funny. but still i cant complain about it.
Pause/Play buttons need some fix, they do pause the animation, but not the sound or music. And uh... well, I didnt see a lot on the animation for some critics, since its just experimental. I can say you can add some extra movement to the sprites, or give more animation to a single sprite.
It was okay.
The animation was okay. Are you even using motion tweening? If not, you may want to consider it. And a story would've been nice.
However, I found this pretty funny, and with a little practice, I'm sure you could be a great animator =)
Heres the real peice of reality...
All that really needs to happen is it needs 2 be longer,funnier & have a storyline!
Please stop making Flash animations with played-out Mario Bros sprites. They are not funny and are indicative of a meager imagination.
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