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This is pretty experimental. Just wondering what you guys think of it.
I'm working on a video with an actual story, but I need to know what I need to improve on with my animation and stuff.
It was okay.
The animation was okay. Are you even using motion tweening? If not, you may want to consider it. And a story would've been nice.
However, I found this pretty funny, and with a little practice, I'm sure you could be a great animator =)
music: 9/10 simple mario music always is great.
animation: 7/10 good animation and funny.
movie itself: 6/10 to short, could be a bit longer to really make it funny. but still i cant complain about it.
Pause/Play buttons need some fix, they do pause the animation, but not the sound or music. And uh... well, I didnt see a lot on the animation for some critics, since its just experimental. I can say you can add some extra movement to the sprites, or give more animation to a single sprite.
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