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Dec 18, 2008 | 3:49 PM EST

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Second pre-episode of "Action Teens" series. A little story about Jack (could be much more, but it's very interesting character of original storyline to tell much more about him right now). Anyway. Have a nice watching, I hope you'll enjoy. :)

WARNING!!! If you still didn't saw a story about Fixy, watch pervious part first! :D

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MishlDirntMishlDirnt

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Sweet

I think Jack is my fave...
Interesting and intriguing. Give me more!



ktkorektkore

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Jack

As others have said, the audio on the voices is too low. I still suggest using Russian voice acting and English subtitling. People will get over the fact that they have to read and it will enhance their experience (since people are going to be complaining about the English voice acting most likely, as they already are).

I liked the one with Fixy better because she was a bit more interesting. Nothing much happened in this one to make you interested in Jack, other than he's "an assassin." I know you said that there's more to him in the actual series, but for these teaser episodes you might still want to give away a little bit more, or at least hint at some mystery about the characters in order to spark a little interest on the viewers' ends.

And I personally thought some of the rock music was ear-bleedingly bad. It almost makes me not want to watch if that's going to be the soundtrack.

Anyway, I don't mean to sound overly negative, but I see the potential in this and so I want to see you suceed. Looking forward to the next character.



Ferris95Ferris95

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Looking good

the voice acting is the only fault.



AtDaBombAtDaBomb

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Interesting, but just a trailer...

It was a let down to find out it was just a trailer but w/e. It was pretty good. My only gripes are that the voice audio was too low and I was getting the impression that the story looks a little cliche.



ZainaZaina

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Bleh.

I want Russian audio. :(


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