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First animation I have made (please don't be to critical of it).
Please can you tell me what I could have done better becuase I know I can improve with my next one by a lot.
WTF? You give me 1 point? Look at your lousy shit this is boring and ugly. Neither does it have a preloader nor a menu, nothing at all really ugly shit i wonder why this shit didn't get blammed, boring poo poo that is.
Not so bad for a first.
I have seen many new animations far worse then this, My current attempt at a first is a gun going off and i'm having trouble with even that simple tweening, so keep things up, you'll learn with time, probably...
Good for the first
I think that everything has been covered. Just wanted to give some support . Keep up the work, you will get there.
My first animation was a blue line that moved around the screen. So for a first animation that was good.
It's a start.
Needs: music, sound, smoother animation, storyline/plot
Keep working at it. Don't be disheartened by my rating either, it may sky rocket next time.
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