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Dec 18, 2008 | 9:33 AM EST

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Hi,

First animation I have made (please don't be to critical of it).

Please can you tell me what I could have done better becuase I know I can improve with my next one by a lot.

Reviews


newgamenewgame

Rated 0 / 5 stars January 8, 2009

What!?

WTF? You give me 1 point? Look at your lousy shit this is boring and ugly. Neither does it have a preloader nor a menu, nothing at all really ugly shit i wonder why this shit didn't get blammed, boring poo poo that is.



commandxcommandx

Rated 3 / 5 stars December 18, 2008

Not so bad for a first.

I have seen many new animations far worse then this, My current attempt at a first is a gun going off and i'm having trouble with even that simple tweening, so keep things up, you'll learn with time, probably...



HalflaskHalflask

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 18, 2008

Good for the first

I think that everything has been covered. Just wanted to give some support . Keep up the work, you will get there.



SwhistlerSwhistler

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 18, 2008

Good

My first animation was a blue line that moved around the screen. So for a first animation that was good.



BlackTempestBlackTempest

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars December 18, 2008

It's a start.

Needs: music, sound, smoother animation, storyline/plot

Keep working at it. Don't be disheartened by my rating either, it may sky rocket next time.

:)


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