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Dec 16, 2008 | 9:07 PM EST

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Just that special playmate for everyone...
Walter is an interesting flash for me. I wanted to work on more of the storytelling aspect of flash and try to go scene to scene with it. I was intriqued by the comment left on my last flash "Inspiration" that talked about the concept of "inner conflict". I thought about it for a while, and suddenly I thought up "Walter". Walter, the enity who does nothing but evil without hesitation, and without resistence from those he plays upon. I don't believe in good and evil, so the idea of an entity that is nothing but pure evil, I find frightening. This is the result. I took some elements from my last flash "Inspiration" and incorporated it here. I hope it goes well with wacthers. I had alot of trouble with the music, but I think I worked it out the best I could. Enjoy...
12-8-08 - 12-16-08
4 Minuets, 27 seconds.
8500 frames.
123 layers.

Reviews


RPGsrokRPGsrok

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Lots of Potential

As far as the plot went, I thought you did quite well. Despite, a bit of a cliche' feel, there was still a sense of suspense, and the point came across.

As others before me have said though, I'd really suggest you work on your animation. It's not like everyone can draw well, but even things like altering camera angles, or using a few gradients can make your work more engaging. Taking the first example, it seemed like most of your figures were drawn from the front on; I'd suggest trying a few side or back shots, and if you're feeling ambitious, try drawing as if looking slightly up or down upon the character (not straight up or down - angled). Even using close-ups on the face can have impact and vary the look of the movie.

You have a lot of potential. Keep trying, and good luck. 3/5, 7/10


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insaneyanishinsaneyanish

Rated 5 / 5 stars

FUCKING CREEPY

God, your first scene of Walter WAS SO FUCKING PERFECT.

The animation was kinda 2nd class, but MAN! The story more than made up for that!


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stealwing33stealwing33

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Few things....

sccare me quite like that did i loved it all the way thru but the eyes of Walter scared me like dead space did right to the core. i literaly felt like i was watching a horror movie ima go ahead and say good job!



doondekadoondeka

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

spookie

very spookie animation was not so good but i luved the story line



hackr1320hackr1320

Rated 5 / 5 stars

It was . . .

Very cool and creepy even tho it did lack in animation, I am guessing that you have worked with flash before but have not discovered it's true potential. It was very interesting and kept me pined to my chair, you are a very good story teller, a bravo to you sir, bravo. I expect to see more from you keep up the good work.

----Sincerely yours,
------------- .hackr1320 >:D