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Dec 16, 2008 | 4:55 PM EST

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Author Comments

Just a small upload to gain some constructive criticm.
So its not finished yet,, not at all..
But i'd like to know how ppl on ng like this way.
Im not entirely sure on how to do this either.
Do i have to turn it in some kind of storyline that goes on for a few subs ?.
Or do i have to make random battles of them each time.

I do not know what to do next xD
It stops at 'Water Nation' :P (well, its not stopping there at all, but its not done further)

Please give reviews on what to IMPROVE. like the animating way, and stuff.
And could someone show me a tut on how to animate water properly ?. since im having difficulties :P.

Take Care,
St0rmChaser

Reviews


shadowknightxshadowknightx

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not really that much wrong with it.

The intro text moved pretty quickly but pausing it was easy enough, the only thing I saw was a few spelling errors in the opening text. This looks interesting, ill be looking forward to seeing more. 3/5


St0rmChaser responds:

thanks shadowknight :D.

yup, more ppl say that the opening text is bad.
This is because i dont have a real story yet.
But i will change it for sure with correct spelling.

Take Care,
St0rmChaser


yoyo911yoyo911

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Nice but....

It's WAy too short even for a ''part 1'' you could have made it longer like after you presented all the ''people'' and what their land look like, that would have been better I think.


St0rmChaser responds:

Yes i will do that with this submission.
I will show a few battles between them :).
since my opinion is that all these texts and explainations are getting bored :P.

St0rmChaser


ArtyArtyArtyArty

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It's good but....

Please finish it!!!!!! What you have so far is excellent.


St0rmChaser responds:

Wow :D ty Arty.

i will finish it ^^
you guys motivate me huge for finishing it :D


Chaos-PhoenixChaos-Phoenix

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad, but....

It got stuck in the middle. Seems like it could have been good though.


St0rmChaser responds:

true. the movie goes till "Water Nation".

It was explained in the description :P.
Thanks for your review.

St0rmChaser


TyrannteufelTyrannteufel

Rated 2 / 5 stars

its too similar to avitar

dude im not a fan i just know the basic plot.... but thats waaay to much like the show..... start fresh with a new account... so no one sez.... "hey you changed it" like morons.... i know its tough to come up with original stuff but cmon :(


St0rmChaser responds:

hey its still quite original.
i changed the story, and i even left out airbending. ! (not on purpose :P )

Even the intro is totally diffrent.

St0rmChaser