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Submitted: 12/16/2008 | 11:23AM EST
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Genre: Other
Current Score: 2.13 / 5.00
237 votes | 861 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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This being my first flash it isn't very good. I just started using the program about a month ago and i spent about a week doing this one. I hop to bring great flash animations to the land of newgrounds.
Im not sure who made the music track, a friend of mine gave it to me to use, but I do know it was someone here on newgrounds. If its yours Im sorry i couldnt find you to credit you.
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Average Score: 4.2 / 10
"Well..."
Practice practice practice!!! there was no real plot, and the drawings weren't great. But the few animated bits were relatively smooth. Perhaps wait a bit before uploading anything else, and really make something you can be proud of! And definately check out peoples tutorials on here!
"keep it up"
Like your style, but its really, really too short.
"PLEASE CAN PEOPLE STOP CALLING THEIR WORK CRAP!!!!"
Im getting sick and tired of people saying, 'This isn't very good and my work is crap.' The truth is yes your work wasen't that great bu to be honest that is your first flash and your style of stickfighting is of nothing that I have ever seen. Your stickmen are different to everyone else because most people tend to draw a heaed then just sticks coming off it. Yours however was a more bulkier stickmen and this made your flash unique. Try to improve on this and you will stand out from the crowd. Another point is you need variety when your men attack. Although trying something new will take you out of your combfort zone, you will gain experienec and will improve steadily from there. This was by no means poor and there is much to expand from here.
"An ok flash for a first"
Far from the worst I've seen. Could do with a few more drawn parts, as in not to much easy "swishing hands" animation.
"cmon"
dont do negative to yurself, it was good! i hope you make a better one cuss it was worth watching it:)
