Score: 2
"Doing my best not to flame you right now"
date: December 14, 2008
I really don't get the point of this movie? What the hell were you trying to accomplish besides "entertaining your dad?" Do you even think this was worth submitting to the portal? Ask yourself that, and when you get an answer tell. Anyway, there was no sound to this at all. Even as short as it is, it really does need some sound. Whether it's corny music or a thump sound when the guy got hit with (what the fuck was that anyway?). Don't you know that the real thing to worry about when creating a flash movie is the sound and originality? And the eye...what the fuck was up with that shit? So it hit her in the face and she threw up...I get it, yet I don't. It has absolutely no plot line and quite frankly, serves no purpose in the NG portal. Also, improve your drawing, it looks like scribble...or something. I could barely make out the background, like what the fuck was that shit? On a closing note, just try improving in every area you can think of: sound, plot, graphics, etc etc. When you feel you really did make something decent, submit it to the portal then and hope it doesn't get blammed.
December 18, 2008
Author's Response:
very constructive criticism. There was nothing to accomplish, just some test animation to 'entertain my dad'. Since it isn't blammed, maybe it is worth submitting. I know there isn't sound, as i just said, it was a test. It was a car, btw. Not everything needs a plot, and the background was done quickly in under a minute. I know i need to improve a lot, thanks for the criticism. If thats what your like not trying to insult someone, It's scary to think what your like when you do try.
