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Dec 12, 2008 | 7:56 PM EST

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Once again I made the background myself.
This is 70 seconds long, its a story of a snake line and a postcard, watch it for you to see :P



Rated 5 / 5 stars December 13, 2008

lolers ^^

You should of sticked to the idea of sending a card, then it would have gone to like north pole and all..

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Rated 2 / 5 stars December 13, 2008

(title in work)

In this day and age, FBF animations have to be a bit better than this to get anywhere. There definitely needs to be more going on in this one. For the most part, it's just one line at a time animating around the screen. I did like you calm choice of music and the background was pretty neat as well.

GlueyMcGee responds:

it's just another style


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars December 12, 2008


Compelling yet boring at the same time. The music was simple and haunting, it went well with the dim coloured background but the black frame by frame line which flew all around the screen didn't seem to follow any particular story, it also felt out of place with its blockyness. Overall it felt as if this flash couldn't exactly do anything, it would have been better with some movement in the background and some decent movement from the line.
In the state its in, it feels too under developed.


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GlueyMcGee responds:

ok...i will se on improving that?


Rated 4 / 5 stars December 12, 2008


the work was amazing, and I now feel inspired! keep it up. (Please try to keep the frame rate a little higher, it makes the snake line seem to jump around a litte bit.)

GlueyMcGee responds:

ok, thanks! i will animate at a higher frame rate , make things look a lil btter :)


Rated 5 / 5 stars December 12, 2008

I see the point of your flashes!

And I like them! There's no plot, but the fact you wander away from other ideas is what makes me think of this as a good idea.

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GlueyMcGee responds:

finally someone who doesn't say or think "su should put characters in this" or "maybe make a storyline"