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M.A.D.N.E.SS 1

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i know it's very short, and i know the vcam came halfway through, but i like to think i did a good job. the next onw will be longer, but i wanted to stay inspired, so i made the prelude episode/ regular episode of m.a.d.n.e.ss.

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pretty good job

Amazing.. But Add Blood In Walls. Plz.

Music names pls?

Good Good!

You made a big improvement from the Madness Violate flash! Nice one. You made the characters move and stuff, you made Milo seem like a total badass.
Nice!! Solid 8/10!!

Improvement

Clearly improved from that other movie. While the whole movie lacks basic storyline, this section of the review will be about the movements and such.

As I said you improved, you added body movement and animated them in the correct manner. However, these movements were very choppy. When animating, try to ease and keep a steady pace of movement with the body parts. Don't add any abrupt movements without first using easing to lead up to it.

The characters were pretty generic. You could have at least made some of your own enemies. And give them a back story that's clearly played out in the movie, like, why is he storming into the building and killing everyone. Also, the art is pretty bad. It looks rushed. Take some time to smooth out the art, add texture, detail, whatever.

And what's with all of these movieclips? I could pause the movie to find the gun still firing or bodies falling in an endless loop, or the feet still moving.
Don't use movieclips, plain and simple. That's just about as lazy as it gets, especially using movieclips in walking. NEVER do that. It doesn't look good. Just animate it in the time line.

And give it an intro like I said earlier. Because I have no idea what's going on or who these people are. You shouldn't have to explain these things to people personally, it should be clear in the movie. And yeah take more time on this, don't just rush an episode out every week. It might seem like that's what people want, but I'm pretty sure people would like a well thought out, clean and smooth animation rather than a hunk of crap that someone pushed out in a couple of days.

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Dec 10, 2008
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