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Dec 9, 2008 | 10:02 PM EST

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This is my first flash animation. It took me longer than i expected. and I now have a new apreciation and respect for flash developers. I'm am also working on a game. Learnign as I go. Let me know what yout think as a first timer. Thanks

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sl93jososl93joso

Rated 0 / 5 stars December 10, 2008

learn to work

for example like me if havent learn to make a flash i would not clear high school and try to work longer it improves



Subzero2213Subzero2213

Rated 1 / 5 stars December 10, 2008

Well...

You probably shouldn't submit your first flash animation here, since it will probably suck. At least you did an okay stick figure animation but it still sucked :p. (not that I could do much better heeh)



DawnslayerDawnslayer

Rated 0 / 5 stars December 10, 2008

Boring

I understand it's your first try, but I measure everyone by the same yardstick. The storyline, or what there was of it, lacked even mild bemusement; storyboards can help you develop longer and deeper plots. The green buttons weren't necessary, and I think the replay needed a hit area. Animation can be much improved; look up some tutroials on character building and see what you can come up with. And as I have been told myself, it needs SOUND.

I give you credit for trying, but you leave a lot to be desired.


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TechB responds:

this was an animation to get the feel for flash. I know it doesn't really have a storyline or any sound. That will come in time i guess. I've been spending ALLOT of time working with macromedia. And its really paying off. I'll be posting soem new stuff sometime idk when but it'll be up. Keep checking back and review some.


Since89Since89

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 9, 2008

Nice idea

Nice idea but you need to not only add sound but a little more frames and make it fast pace but smooth ya know just add some more detail. People mainly pay attention to that and sound and make sure you have a moral to it. Not just "This life is not for me" he has to have a really FUC*** up reason to do it so think of something that happen to him drastic. 9/10 though that's nice.


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TechB responds:

thank you for the 9/10. I know it needs ALLOT of work, but it was my first go at it. I'm getting better and better everyday.


LokyGhostOfVenganceLokyGhostOfVengance

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 9, 2008

WHEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

This is pretty good but could use some sound and a few tweaks to the animation