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by: Quriky
by: DjTeChniQue
Submitted: 12/09/2008 | 03:21PM EST
File Info: Movie | 224.9 KB | Add Movie to Favorites
Genre: Experimental
Current Score: 2.31 / 5.00
231 votes | 720 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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hey newgrounds this is my first flash submitted to newgrounds. so dont be harsh on me and if someone could help me figure out how i get the little picture icon for my flash movie i would appreciate it a ton, thanks and enjoy.
*edit* i forgot to mention this was a rushed project for my advanced animation class. so i could have made it better but i ran out of time. but be assured you will see alot more from me and much better. thanks for the support and constructive critisim its appreciated.
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Average Score: 6.0 / 10
"This was entertaining"
~~REVIEW~~ This was a cute and entertaining flash i love the character shows you have good detail, you could detail the backround abit better, maybe with some flying birds or something to make it look abit more real.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~ Some backround details would be nice
~~OVERALL~~ Decent flash cute and funny, nice work
~X~
yeah i know. This was a rushed a project. I didnt like doing it either which is why i rushed to get it done and plus I ran out of time cause i procrastinated :P.
But thanx for the review man. i could use some constructive critism.
"lol"
Well that was random. It's a nice animation, very creative, some fun concepts, text in the clouds is a neat idea . . . the graphics could use some more detail though, zoom in and add shade/etc to make them even better, or smoothen out a little. Overall it's a good start, keep at it.
-cd-
ty man i will see to it i do better in future projects
"Uh..."
This... isn't a haiku.
yes it is. its just not your everday hiaku but its set up like one. we did in class together
"Hmm..."
So-so animation, but some potential is there, good sense of humor, I'd like to see more of these, haikus could be funny flash form now that I think about it.
thanks
