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IT'S A DAMN MUSICAL!!!
I envy you
It was a good decision to come back and remake the first episode because it really adds to the enjoyment of the series.You've improved big time.
Yeah, I thought so too. Now I'm proud of the whole series. Next up is sending it to all TV-stations in the whole world! Yes, I am improving :)
Pretty cool man. I liked your style and creative songs. You should make a site and we can cross promote our sites or something - Parks from College University
Yeah, that's a great idea :)
I just have to make a site first. I just got a server. Now all I need to make is... a page?! What should I put on it? My site will never be as cool as yours! Haha! I hope you'll check out the rest as it only gets better from here! THANKS A LOT FOR THE REVIEW, WHAT AN HONOUR!!!
A new take on the first episode. Not sure what I think of it...
maybe the best, yeah..
Well Marcus, seems like you've made your better movie here... very, very, VERY good.
But I really prefer the series. I mean, this is probably the funniest, but the story is the best thing, even knowing that your art is fabulous.
Ok, ok, so please submit #6!
By the way, you composed some good stuff here.. I can see you like music, so what about doing some kind of virtual band thing? If you'd like to, well, maybe.. tell me.
YP#6 is comming. I was thinking of submitting it today, but then I saw that CU#5 was up and thought there's no chance will ever win over them so - I'll submit it tomorrow!
Before I started with YP I thought of making a series about a band, I didn't have any ideas for a cool story though, so I droped the idea... Maybe some kids at YP can start a band in some epsiode?
Possibly your best yet in terms of humour.
Actually, make that DEFINITELY your best yet in terms of humour.
It possibly doesn't have /quite/ the same re-watchability value (I know that's not a word but...) as the other 'normal' episodes, but...
The first time I saw it, I really cracked up at the songs.
And you do so much more than just play amusing songs. You make little changes and basically do a pastiche of your own cartoon. That's why it's so hilarious. I could go on about all the bits I liked, but I won't spoil anything for others.
The little bits beyond the basic joke of the songs means that this is definitely worth watching at least twice, and it's great how it doesn't take itself too seriously.
However, whilst you obviously know best (it's your baby and everything), I feel that this is definitely funnier after you have seen the 'normal' episodes.
For this reason, you might want to consider making the original #1 the first episode again on the series' page.
Apart from that, I have next to no criticisms. I couldn't decide between a 10 and a 9, and I thought about this for a long time.
The only criticism I could make is that the word 'losly' (loosely) is mispelt the 2nd time it comes up in the credits.
And, looking at the past reviews, you're probably disappointed that I'm going to rate this higher than YTown Public (normal series), but I seriously find this funny.
But, if you made another one, it wouldn't be that funny any more.
(It's a 1-off joke-type thing I think)
The normal series is better in terms of it's story though, and works really well as a series. But this made me laugh more than anything else I'd ever seen on NG.
Possibly also more than anything I'd ever seen on TV!
I'll give you a 10, but in good faith that you change the spelling of that 1 word in the credits.
I will have this one as the no1, because I like this one better. And no, I'm not disappointed that you gave a ten - I'm very pleased that you liked my humour this time. Finally :) I will fix the spelling. I did upload it again - I thought! But accidentally uploaded an unfinished version of YP#6 - Ooops...
YP#6 IS commning tomorrow!
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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