Score: 8

"Disturbing"

by: HeroicDevil

date: November 15, 2009

That was pretty...um...whoa. I would have never pictured that scene going down like that. I'm just glad the scene with the wierdo in the alley didn't go any further than it did.

Score: 10

"When you put it into perspective of a reality...."

by: JakBaronKing

date: November 15, 2009

There is no way a malnourished boy would stand a chance against the cruelty of muggers and molesters.

Hypothetically, if any kid had a winning ticket, he'd be damn lucky he didn't get mugged.

And ha! The crippled legs at the end made me laugh. There is no way anyone could just 'walk' after being bed ridden.

Thanks for killing the fantasy of the strange tale of Willy Wonka that already had too many illogical holes filled up with nonsense.

Score: 8

"Heh good job."

by: Mariofan9

date: November 15, 2009

It was sorta funny, mostly. Art and humor were good. The animation needs a little work, but for the rest good job.

Score: 10

"This was great!"

by: deadspread83

date: November 10, 2009

Really very funny. I love the look on Charlie's face and his shaky ass hands holding the ticket. Good stuff.

Score: 9

"Very funny"

by: Ericho

date: November 7, 2009

I like how you use the title "harsh reality" to really go into the deconstructive nature. I also loved the animation, especially how Charlie ran and looked so stupid. The use of audio was nicely done as well, especially that crazy "Candyman" stuff. It was also funny when he threw the candy bar. It was unexpected how originally it was just a fantasy and then you went for a pediphiliac joke. You really know how to keep a joke going as long as it needs to.