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I realize its short, but I hope you'll get passed that and know that I am kind of a noob with flash, well enjoy anyway.
my buddy is just like that fucking noob
For me, it didn't have that much content...I mean, it's about a guy sniping people and I think you forced some swears...
That Was Hilarious These Nubs Obviously Don't Know Comedy When They See It
Thanks bro I appreciate it.
A Good Attempt
Dude, honestly it was a pretty decent flash for a "flash noob." The graphics weren't the best, but it was good enough to the point where it really wasn't a problem, which is usually the telltale sign of beginners.
I would've gave this flash more stars if only the audio was better (mainly the voice acting). Reading the response to WraithAscendant, I know you've used Audacity. However, if you plan to make better quality flashes, either get a better mic, get voice lessons (for speaking in different voices), or use an AutoTune-like VST for Audacity.
All in all though, the flash was pretty good. The length of the flash didn't feel too short, since it was a basic plot that everyone can relate to. The graphics were pretty nice for a beginner, but like I said the audio could've been better.
Keep up the work and maybe one day your flashes may be so magnificent that it reaches the NG front page!!!
While I think you put in a good effort, I have to agree that you need to improve particularly voice acting. You can use Audacity to modulate you voice if you have no one else to act. <(^^,)>
I totally did do that. I used audacity and everything.
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