December 7, 2008
Author's Response:
Constructive criticism is always appreciated! Thank you for the review! I have reasons for doing everything you didn't like.
-The scenes were supposed to be long, that was to reflect the length of the day and the insane amount of time that we in retail have to listen to this music. It really is a form of torture. I know it hardly compares to retail, but google:"torture music"
-There was supposed to be a lack of color until the Santatron showed up.
-The lack of animation stemmed from the required quiet 'acceptance' of the situation...
Don't worry, if I get to finish my second submission, you'll get plenty of action!
Thank you again for the review!