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Dec 5, 2008 | 9:38 AM EST

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Ok first of all,i know this is crappy and all,but somday i'll learn and do better ,but for now my first flash movie project :) its Itachi's birthday and toby is a really "good boy" enjoy :)(hope u like it,don't forget to WRITE REWIEV) BTW:this is very short.

Reviews


naruto197naruto197

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Lol

Hehe made me laugh :3



FarhzeugFarhzeug

Rated 3 / 5 stars

it's not that bad

in fact, its good when thinking off that this is your first flash, well, of course it needs improvement, but i am sure that you have what it takes too get a good creator. maybe you should try watching things before sending them out too look on it again and see if you can do anything better. in fact, it's te thought that counts, this flash is better than no flash, keep practicing, i think you would do well... oops, i forgot what i wanted too say next... well, good bye for now, let's see how much you've gotten better the next time i watch one of your flashes


Neverman responds:

Yeah,my animation suck =D Trying to improve it ..


CheshFireCheshFire

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Its not bad

Animation in general is pretty hard and although there isn't very much in here I like the story. Its a good thing you put the music in there, otherwise it would have been a bit boring.


Neverman responds:

Yeah :D thanks :) anyway,ill try to improve.


chunkycheese12chunkycheese12

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well...

I have to say that it's not TERRIBLE, but it's not awesome. I can see some effort into it. It's actually better than some first flash projects i've seen from other people. It feels more like a comic book or a slide show rather than an anmation, and hasn't really got any movement. If it had the graphics ramped up a bit, it would look really cool i would think. Just needs to be longer.

The music actually fit it a bit, I didn't expect it to but it did. It also seemed a little bit hard to follow on what was actually happening, but oh well :). I would like to see more from you, and I hope you start to improve.

Overall, a pretty decent flash. It has a lot of room for improvement, but has potential.

3/5
5/10


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Neverman responds:

Hehe thanks :)


vieira11vieira11

Rated 3 / 5 stars

lol

music cheered me up haha
and one day u will become a master at this lol


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Neverman responds:

Hehe thanks :) btw saw your flashes,ur drawing really good,the problem that ur flashes are really short :)