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This is my first ever flash (attempted or completed). This is a comic-based flash from a website called NintendoCity. I had fun creating this little, what I like to call, mini-spode.
As for getting comments, I hope many of you all will give me constructive criticism back to help me improve my work (as I know, it is FAR from perfect). So, I'd appreciate your vote and your view.
EDIT: A spelling mistake was corrected.
Nice animation. I think if would have been better if you had "travelled" down the hole rather than just fading to it, and the ending left a lot to be desired. Not bad though.
It was ok.
Nice animation. The text balloons were pretty decent and smooth. But the ending was so sudden.
I think I'll see more of you later.
WESLEY PIPES YOU KNOW WHAT I'M SAYIN' HOW YA'LL DOIN'? sprites are for fools. learn to draw son.
More Story or Laughs
Nice animation, sound, and of course art. The story really leaves something to be desired, though. "Look, it's a thing-ie..." The final joke is funny, but the beginning could use some work.
Everything went pretty smoothly but it was just a little bit short but still good job!
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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