Score: 7

"No, your welcome!"

by: OxSox

date: January 5, 2009

I liked this little short, although this movie isn't great in itself, you show a lot of potential:
Art/Animation: Your art isn't bad, it's just very simplistic. I think if you just spent more time on the artwork and made it more detailed, which I know you can do you'll have a very good looking animation. Your animations are seamless, but you never animated anything to complex. Still, excellent job on the animations.

Story/humor: Ehhh... it wasn't a bad storyline, but it wasn't great either. Basically the entire story was trying to get to a single punchline. Thtat's okay, but even the punchline was a bit hackneyed. I could basically the joke coming ahead of time. If you want to make a great animation you need a more complex storyline and more pay off at the end. I think that is were your movie really suffered. But it's also an area that's not impossible to fix!

Sound: I thought the sound was very appropriate, well done there.

Overall it's got to be one of the best movies I've seen under 200k, put sometime into a longer one, and I think you could have front page.

Score: 8

"Well done"

by: Shynoh

date: December 4, 2008

I especially like the fact that you kept the exact same animation for both characters, even tough the first part (ball getting stuck into the tree) was made a long time before you finished it. If other animators would have done what you did, you would see a lot of difference between the old and new part. But even tough you got much better since you started, you kept your style. Congrats for that.

Score: 8

"{{Charming}}"

by: Aci6

date: December 3, 2008

A wonderfully charming animation, its short, the artwork is simplistically brilliant, the music is brilliant and the idea is executed perfectly with this in mind.
There's a hidden joke in amongst it all which makes it even better, the speech style can be linked to films in the early 30s when films first started, this helps to give the flash its own little theme and cross style.
Overall; enjoyable, short to upload its a little gem.

~A~

Score: 9

"awwwww"

by: kakashi333

date: December 3, 2008

that was cute but some mean :( poor kid

Score: 7

"Very Cute."

by: SpaceAgeCaveMan

date: December 3, 2008

I liked it, and I had a good chuckle at the end. =)