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This movie was originally started in 2006 but I never took the time to finish it, until now! ^^
Enjoy and review please!
-A short one, by MarsYam
No, your welcome!
I liked this little short, although this movie isn't great in itself, you show a lot of potential:
Art/Animation: Your art isn't bad, it's just very simplistic. I think if you just spent more time on the artwork and made it more detailed, which I know you can do you'll have a very good looking animation. Your animations are seamless, but you never animated anything to complex. Still, excellent job on the animations.
Story/humor: Ehhh... it wasn't a bad storyline, but it wasn't great either. Basically the entire story was trying to get to a single punchline. Thtat's okay, but even the punchline was a bit hackneyed. I could basically the joke coming ahead of time. If you want to make a great animation you need a more complex storyline and more pay off at the end. I think that is were your movie really suffered. But it's also an area that's not impossible to fix!
Sound: I thought the sound was very appropriate, well done there.
Overall it's got to be one of the best movies I've seen under 200k, put sometime into a longer one, and I think you could have front page.
You do speak wisely! ;)
But it wasn't my intention to create anything complex, just wanted something that was fun to make.
Btw, I really appreciate the constructive advice you just gave me!
I especially like the fact that you kept the exact same animation for both characters, even tough the first part (ball getting stuck into the tree) was made a long time before you finished it. If other animators would have done what you did, you would see a lot of difference between the old and new part. But even tough you got much better since you started, you kept your style. Congrats for that.
that was cute but some mean :( poor kid
I liked it, and I had a good chuckle at the end. =)
I actually like the old movie style you did with the text. Can't say I was a huge fan of the animation style, but it was original. Great work!
I do realise the animation was pretty simplistic (and I guess that is why you're no fan of it), but it was really my purpose to make the movie simple.
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