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The Random Story [preview

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rated 1.30 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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random
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story

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Uploaded
Dec 3, 2008 | 5:16 AM EST

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Author Comments

Timmy wakes up in some random forrest and dosnt know how he got there so he walks around and finds some random thing

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Ummmm this is an experimentel comedy that im doing there is 5 episodes this one is meeting hes friends created the full title of it is - The Random Story - Waken Up

Enjoy please rate and comment also i dont have a pre loader or sound sorry ill hopfully have sound by the 3rd one

Reviews


GarrettCGAGarrettCGA

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

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...what was that about? It ended explaining nothing.



MoshchamplooMoshchamploo

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Not nice

OK, you need to improve like...everything. You should have sound, the movie sould be about something, I mean...WTF? Dude you really need to improve, so dont haste to upload the next... you better take your time and make a nice movie.
3/10 I guess for the effort


SuperArtist responds:

thanks for the advise man and i am spending time on the next one :)


trgdortrgdor

Rated 1 / 5 stars

weak

It needs:
sound
plot
to be longer
and have more time spent on it