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Here is some corny jokes I animated. Enjoy
Yeah, you really dug deep there for those classic corny jokes. It is appreciated.
I do understand that the jokes were intentionally corny and that's ok I guess (the last one about the Tenessee divorce was actually pretty funny but also pretty old), but I think the whole routine would come across a bit better, if the audience acknowledged the jokes with silence rather than laughter, perhaps with intermitten cricket sounds. That way the flash could come off as funny even if the jokes aren't either that or have "Mike" be a little more of a self depricating comedian (like Conan O'brien) and accuse the audience of giving him pity laughs, or of being liquored up enough to think he's funny. I think that could really give a lot more character to this flash. the drawings and animations are by no means bad, but they seem rather generic, and the opening announcers voice seems far less than enthusiastic, if your spoofing stage comedy you should really sell. Let your audience really get into the mood. other than that nice flash, and it looks like you've come a way since I last saw the preview for it.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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