Score: 8

"Nice joke"

by: Coop83

date: December 30, 2008

Well set up, nice punchline and a good lack of morality - I like it.

I'm not exactly sure about your animation style, as the snowman just looked too weird with his stubble growing over his chin like that. I think that the other names for the drugs were well thought out and you certainly delivered the punchline with a killer instinct.

Maybe it should have been longer when you went over the addictions of the other people in the toon, as it might have been able to take this piece further.

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Score: 10

"LOL"

by: muffinman9

date: December 29, 2008

LOL that was pretty funny, some good jokes in here. The graphics were good too and good story, keep it up!

Score: 8

"Funny"

by: Haggard

date: December 28, 2008

Well, the walking sound was already mentioned so often, no need to tell you that again. ^^

The graphics are pretty nice, even though it all looks pretty grainy when zoomed in. The voice acting was done pretty good. But there where sometimes some static sounds when the snowman was talking.

The flash is pretty short, but the joke is very well delivered. To be honest, I like it better when flashes are short but funny as if they are hours long and still only have one punchline to deliver.

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Score: 8

"Pretty good"

by: C-Doodlez-Man

date: December 23, 2008

I mean I guess the story was ok. Animation was pretty good. The snow walking steps were annoying though. Didn't sound like footsteps. But it was ok. Good job.

Score: 7

"Not too bad."

by: Fro

date: December 22, 2008

Animation/Graphics - At first I was going to comment a little on your drawings here, but after reading your author comments I see that they were suppose to be the way they were because you were making it for a collab. I wouldn't mind seeing the same flash or a similar flash done in smoother drawings. The animation itself was pretty smooth though so no real complaints there.

Story/Content - A nice little parody flash here. Short and too the point. Too bad it was too long for the collab because I'm sure it would have been a great contribution to it. The jokes were ok, they didn't really make me laugh and I didn't find the flash all too humorous, but the little eggnog part at the end make me chuckle a little bit.

Audio - The voices were done very well and they were well synced with the animation of the mouths. I do think that you could have used a better sound effect for the walking though. It didn't really sound like he was walking on snow or ice. It didn't even sound like he was walking on anything for that matter. Perhaps something that sounds a little bit more crunchy would have worked better like we was walking on snow.

Overall - A nice short flash parody. Could have used some better sound effects, but for the most part was done well.

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