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im new to fbf, but i think you will enjoy this project. running time is about a minute. dedicated to peter ahern, for making awesome surreal stuff.
Well do you want the good news or the bad news first? Lets see...i like the raw animation style. The music you selected was on point to. But the story is almost non exsistant. The pace of the movie is to fast and its just not that good of a movie. But you got potential.
Not much to say really
The only place that you got your two stars from was that your intro had a nice build up and gave us a rough idea of what was wrong with the guy. In the main part of the flash though it was very confusing. It was so fast and blurry that I couldnt see what was going on. Ok a parasite came out of him but the rest was a mystery. You have to slow things down and give your viewers a chance to see what is going on. Then you can pick up the tempo. A very confusing flash but trust me I have seen considerably worse than this.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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