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This is my first attempt at flash making and its kinda short but plz dont rate to badly.
I made this brcause chocobos are awesome.
Chocobos are fine.
This is okay. All I can really say is that you could have done more with it, such as make a background, etc. Not something I would watch over and over again, but not something I would condemn to hell either. So, practice would probably be a good idea, but then again, it always is.
i wanted to use a bacground and i had a cool one, the thing s i would have a white box around all my sprites and thats no good.
you gotta love those chocobos XD
The ending kinda blew. >__>
But it wasn't all bad, there wasn't a whole lot of movement (besides a running chocobo, copied and pasted over and over again) but it was well planned and kinda funny, it was hard to understand the humor because of the bad presentation. Overall, lame. You can do better, I bet. ;)
thanks for your honesty. im working hard to learn how to do flash movies. The main problem here is that i cant make background without my sprites having a white box around them. :( once i figure this out i can make something better. Also i hd only 3 hours to make this so it was cut short. Thats why the ending "kinda blew". Plz tell me how to do sprites with out whitebox im pm if you can.!!!
Effort is Half of everything.(to me it is)
Well...I cant imagine enough effort in here to fill a week,And not a full everyday week a After school I have homework then flash time week. But Still-the sprites were Ok and Im Sure you had some trouble making it And its your first So Good Job ._. Its alot better than anything ive done.
actualy i made this in an hour.
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