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Mario wonders into Molemen territory and the Moleman "Guard" trys to kill Mario. Will Mario Succeed?
I have been working with this Flash for two days and FINALLY I can post it. It's way better than the last one. I've put a lot of work on it. Tell me what you guys think.
Wasn't bad, but wasn't great either.
I've never been much of a fan of sprite animations. The lack of originality is what I usually dislike about these... but hey, at least yours actually HAD a story. I'm giving it a 6, only because I got a little laugh out of the end. Keep it up, and next time, use your own characters.
A decent effort
Sprite movies are a good place for beginners to start, but the bad thing is that the movies tend to be a bit cliched when posted here, just because the art style is the same (obviously).
That being said the animation was pretty good, although you should think about animating the backgrounds and stylising the dialogue properly.
What raises a good sprite movie above the others is using sprites in a new and interesting way, good use of sound effects and a plot to drive the thing along. Take a look at the classics (eg Rise of the Mushroom Kingdom, Super Mario Bros Z) and have another go. Nice effort all the same!
Thanks for the Review! yeah I know the dialogue was a bit...yeah I didn't quite like it either but I mean speech boxes like in SMBZ are in about every type of Sprite Flash. I tried taking it a different way but It wasn't good enough. oh well I'm still a beginner I'll learn. I'll be sure to animate the background next time.
Keep practicing and you'll get really good someday.
Don't forget to make sure you're having fun.
well done good luck in future animation
i like the moleman
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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