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This is the second tale about my favorite stick character, Bob!
Bob II: The Reborn
Sorry, there is no music, neither sound, I am a totally begginer, please, forgive me!
If this submission, and Bob I, don't get blamed, I WILL SUCK MY OWN BALLS
Enjoy it! If you can...
kinda wasn't interesting with out sound.. probably woulda been better with the sound involved. and the animation was alittle to fast. and be cooler if there was alittle more invovled with that but its not to bad ^.^
Apreciated by your words, it really is not a good movie, as I am a begginer, but any try to pass judgement is worth trying :)
I could see how you could have worked on this for quite some time, but you could have made it better if you added some sound-effects as there are a handful of moments where they could be used. I also agree with the reviewer below me, it was way too fast paced and I couldn't understand what was going on. At least you put some effort into it.
Well, I didn't spend much on it, just an afternoon, and yeah, it could be pretty much better, but I only had a trial of flash, don't know when I am getting it full, and was kind of in a hurry, so the real purpose was more to test my skills than making something enjoyable. I thank you for the tips and, about the fast paced, yeah, in the end there was some stuff that were unreadable, the credits, and about the sound... I am just a begginer and learned today, after submiting this flash to NG, how to add sound. Though I won't update this flash movie, I will of course use it on further works. Thanks for reviewing!
Well, there's not much that I can say about this submission. It was short and fast paced. You could have had something good here if you slowed things down a little bit. Also, you could have added a LOT more detail. A stick figure standing in front of a crooked line with a few additional images appearing here and there isn't going to be enough.
You have some potential here (not to be rude or cruel, it's just the truth). It's a matter of putting in a little more detail here and there. If you are more determined to put more time and effort into your future works then you may have a decent flash submitted to the portal.
Keep it up, and send me a PM when you've created something new.
I really apreciate constructive critisism, even more when it comes with tips! Thanks for spending your valuable time just to tell me I have some potential ( I really loved those words xD ). I know it's short and mediocre, but it was my first flash to pass judgment in this site, and I am never going to forget it, and I ve already started some other stuff, though I don't know when I will give continuation.
Thanks for the review!
ur animation is actually kinda smooth but if u put more work into it im sure you could do better
how long did this take you?
my last flash took me around about a day and a half of work
Bob I and Bob II took me an afternoon each, and it's been a while since I don't work on the third movie, no time because of school and other stuff... Do you really think my anymation is kinda smooth? If you really mean so, wow, those are very worth words for me!
When I began watching it, I thought it'd suck, and it kinda did.. but I cant help myself laughing as hell to this. I dont know why, but something about it is so funny, even thogh the graphix can be imrooved "a bit"
It could also use som soundeffects, discrete ones =P GJ
Oh well, this is my first response as an author and I thought I would have to use excuses to explain why it sucks, actually it does, but, that was the last kind of review I was expecting, and... Thanks! Yeah, I could work "a little" harder on the graphics, though I try to compensate it on the plot, though it's non sense, that's what I try to do... I'm really glad you like the movie! Really apreciated for your review!
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