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Nov 25, 2008 | 1:29 PM EST

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This is my first actual finished flash movie, hope you like it ;)

Its about a red stickman versus a blue stickman (not very original eh?)
They use some powers similar to the naruto's series.

Thanks Flashback (DJ Trezy) for letting me put your music in this movie :)

Edit:
I wanna make a new one, however I could use your help with some ideas
- area
- color
- preloader practice (i suck at that for some reason :P)

Reviews


FlashBlackFlashBlack

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very Great :D

Hey Kippetjetoktok xD

I will write this review in english because of other people who might want to know what i am saying. (since that is quite difficult to follow in dutch ;)

The animation is realy cool, and the effects weren't to bad.
Here are some hints you could use.

1.
Use a higher FPS. like 16 or maybe even 20.
It will make your animation much smoother and a must for the eyes.
However, it will take more time and accurate animatimg.

2.
Bring more variations in the sound effects you have.
Use more sounds than only kick and punch noises,
Since you use RPG maker 2003, (did i recommend that to you ?)
You could use many more sounds in your submission.

3.
Do not fear the NG size limit for Flash Submissions.
You have for about 10 mb + for a submission.
I know you fear for it. (since you've told me that xD).

Nevertheless this submission is realy realy good for a first attempt.
At least, ,, its better than mine, which got bl*mmed by zero bombers.
Dont let them ruin your score. (yes i know its difficult to resist :P ).
Atleast my vote will compensate it a bit for you.
there you go.

1.72 / 5.00 (+ 0.048) 5/5 10/10 Favorited.

take care,
FlashBlack
P.S My second account in here is : St0rmChaser


kippetjetoktok responds:

2.
I looked for other nice punch/kick sounds on rpg2003, but the other ones were crappy. And you did recommend rpg maker to me :P.

3.
hehe :P

thanks for comment ;)


omgmonkeymanomgmonkeyman

Rated 3 / 5 stars

ok.....

good story,bad animation next time use more frames but liked multiple ending:)


kippetjetoktok responds:

Thanks for your comment ;), I know I still need a lot of practice animating it all...


Chaos-PhoenixChaos-Phoenix

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Well....

The visuals weren't... inspiring, to say the least. But I do see something in the fight scene itself. Good examples of fight scene coreography (IMO) would be "HyuugaNeji VS RockLee" by DuDul (GREAT combat and winner alternates) & "One More Final Battle" by Matt Roszak (matt-likes-swords) (over the top fight moves).

As for stick animation, I'd check out the Xiao Xiao series. Hopefully, with improvements, the next flash will be better. ^_^


kippetjetoktok responds:

I watched the xiao xiao allready and see the smoothness how it has to be, ill try making at least 2x more frames for my next flash, any1 has a cool idea? :P


MrGibinsMrGibins

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

ok I guess

not very good, but ok for a fist submission extra point for the two endings



SephtisSephtis

Rated 4 / 5 stars

It was ok

Shows potential, but your stick animation could be better, try to have more frames, that way the movement will be smoother. But for a first submission, very well done.


kippetjetoktok responds:

Thanks, but I need something original for my next one.