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This was really short and retarded!
i dont get it please explain
funny but wtf i dont get it
Nah, I hate to explain jokes
I thought it was kinda funny
just add a couple sounds and i would of been...more kinda ...funny
and ur preloaders a little messed
What's wrong with the preloader? Didn't it autoplay or what is it?
Thanks for the constructive review
Not Terribly Funny
While the art can certainly be improved (no doubt about that), the storyline is kinda boring and too predictable. Hone both your artistic and storywriting skills and you'll be an amazing Flash animator.
Yes the art could have been better. But I thouht the storyline was okay, considering that this is just a short.
Anyway Thanks for the helpful review!
So random, i laughed at this movie.
I think the grafics are ok, but the animation is too slow. For example, the fat guy takes too long to eat thaty hamburguer, i think you should do a faster animation, or just give a higher FPS to the movie.
No sound and stuff, but it's a short so no problem at all. I just think it needed a background music.
Anyways, cool movie, i think it should pass judgement. :P
Nice to hear it made you laugh :)
You think it's too slow? hmm.. well the biting scene is really quite slow, but I believe the rest's fast enough. Background would be good thing, yes.
Thanks for reviewing
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