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This is something I just did for fun see how well I could do lip sync and sorry that there is no foot movement i don't really know how to do it properly. Hope you enjoy it!
Loved the randomness
But how do you make things transform like that mom, even I don't know how to do that...
Shape Tween bro
nice try but use walking movments instead of sliding over
Balance of good points and bad.
Okay, let's start with the bad and then move on to the good.
The bad: Since you said that you did this for fun, I'm not gonna lecture you about the drawing too much. All I'll say is that maybe you should use more color.
The Good: The concept was pretty funny and kind of random, I admit that I did laugh a little. I loved the shape tween from the mom to the monster at the end... because when se's in the middle of her "transformation", you don't know quite what she will be turning into. I thought at first she was melting or something. Then, unexpectantly...a monster! Ahhh! LOL. XD
Overall, I think you did a decent job for something that you did just for fun. I would suggest some day remaking this flash and fixing the problems with the color and maybe cleaning up the drawings a bit more. Otherwise, this was pretty cool. I'll give you a 3/5 on the rating, and I'll give this a 7/10 for star rating. Good work! Keep it up, and good luck on future submissions!
thanks for the review and the vote ( which gave score down :'( ) i accidentally clicked useless when i tried to click helpful but i'll do what you said thanks!
since you are still not experienced enough in flash. and i agree with you. croyt was just plain harsh. he could have said it politely like smirkstudios. and twhen the lady transformed into a troll/goblin/whateverit is, that was okay considering you are not experienced with flash.
Thanks for the compliment :)
ummm... you might try harder next time.
this is not terrible, but there are some things you still need to learn for a worthwhile cartoon. you need to do a little more frame by frame animation instead of just shape and motion tweening your way thru. good ideas here, and not bad graphix, but it needs more charisma than just tweening. i'm sure you'll do better next time, keep on thinkin up those ideas!!!
Yeah thanks for the review! As i said I'm not that good with flash so far thanks though you left a nicer review than the asshole below
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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