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Here is my first flash movie in Newgrounds
I hope you like it. =]
If you made things a touch slower, added more frames, and made the thing longer in general, you'd have a good flash, you show some decent animatin skill with sticks here, just be patient in its creation, these things take time, but get much better ratings if they are of better quality. im waiting for ur next one ;).
it was great for a first time but was very short
Videos like these are under rated
Im affraid that you have lost 5 of your stars mainly because of the fact that it was extremely short. That however is that only thing that I can criticise. The animtaion was fast, fluid and the fighting was to a very good standard. To get your next stick fight to a high quality I suggest that you look at the way that the person who created the shock series did his videos. Non stop movement, which had a good ending with some of the best stick fighting I have ever seen and had great music to fight to. Add some of these factors here and your looking at maybe increasing your rating to at least maybe 7 or 8. Having been your first video i would have been very proud of this. Keep up the good work.
thanks man :P
(title in work)
It's not too bad at all. I liked some of the lighting effects you used in this to make it a bit more interesting. The animations weren't bad at all. I think your score would be a lot higher if you put some more time into this and made it longer. The storyline in this is just way too linear and ordinary.
I don't like this animation. Very simple fight, and sticks is bad.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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