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Nov 23, 2008 | 8:08 PM EST

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Originally a shool project, we all had to make a Digital Short Story, i was the only one to use flash!

I hope to improve on everything of course, especially voices and story writting!



Rated 5 / 5 stars


No wai!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


that was pretty cool nice job


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Ha good job

Not bad. Animation is decent, and the accent is so bad its funny. Hahha weird plot but still funny. Good job


Rated 2 / 5 stars

animation, artwork,quality, characters,voices,plot

Animation-ok, not the best ive seen, alot of still images
Artwork-pretty bad, the characters had no defining features
quality- really bad, you struggled quite a bit on this, there were a lot of things that just completely threw off the balance for this
characters-completely stupid, generic kids, stupid bunny, genereic shadowy bad guy
voices, all right, crappy accent
plot-the worst, made no sense, overall pretty stupid
and steel guitars arent made of steel

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cHe3z responds:

thanks for the feed back, but i can't do accentss very well, and i'ts a custom guitar, i will DEFFINATELY reanimate this!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

yes i agree

smoking is sick i totally giving this a 5