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Originally a shool project, we all had to make a Digital Short Story, i was the only one to use flash!
I hope to improve on everything of course, especially voices and story writting!
HO HO HO
that was pretty cool nice job
Ha good job
Not bad. Animation is decent, and the accent is so bad its funny. Hahha weird plot but still funny. Good job
animation, artwork,quality, characters,voices,plot
Animation-ok, not the best ive seen, alot of still images
Artwork-pretty bad, the characters had no defining features
quality- really bad, you struggled quite a bit on this, there were a lot of things that just completely threw off the balance for this
characters-completely stupid, generic kids, stupid bunny, genereic shadowy bad guy
voices, all right, crappy accent
plot-the worst, made no sense, overall pretty stupid
and steel guitars arent made of steel
thanks for the feed back, but i can't do accentss very well, and i'ts a custom guitar, i will DEFFINATELY reanimate this!
yes i agree
smoking is sick i totally giving this a 5
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