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Nov 23, 2008 | 4:18 PM EST

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The first installment of the Bronzeman series. It is set in a world where technology and magic exist side by side. The events depicted take place after a world wide war between a demon named Reshxeel, who tried to extinguish magic in favor of robotics controlled by him, and Arkin a former mage who takes up the arcane arts once again to defend humanity and follows a former general of Reshxeel's: Johnathan Winters

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BoSs2KiNgBoSs2KiNg

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Potential.

The names where a bit out there. But I believe that you can deliver this story very nicely. Please continue, I am interested.


Kxs responds:

Heh I have trouble with names sometimes


KyaztroKyaztro

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nice

Wish it could have been a bit longer, and try to animate the story a bit more than just plain text, I'll keep an eye out for the sequel



ArradeArrade

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome

Love it



zombiegerbilzombiegerbil

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

cool

since it was just a prologue, you cant review much, but get the proper thing up! and perhaps make the writing at the start slower and fix his walking.



AlDBarronAlDBarron

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Looks like this is going to be really good!

You've definitely got my interest piqued. This particular flash ended a bit awkwardly in the middle of something - that might be something to pay attention to next time, but still, a very intriguing introduction. I hope you don't stop like so many do when they're fresh out of the gate with a new idea for a series - this looks like it has a lot of potential. :-)


Kxs responds:

You're absolutely right about the ending in the middle. The next part was actually intended to be connected but if I didn't actually divide it up I'd get too bogged down. Thanks for the kind words and yeah i know exactly what you mean. I get pissed when there's a good movie promising to be a series that never develops