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well, It only took about 30 minutes, Because im slow, But im new to flash so for me it's pretty good!
It's very decent at your standard. The physics could be a lot better. Nice movements but i didn't quite like te sketchy ball. Nevertheless. great effort.
For the Link to zomation you spelled the URL wrong you spelled it "zomaton"
for the animation it looks good for a tenth I think you should have at least made the ball spin when it was coming up to the screen other wise its great for a tenth as I said before
this is kewl but too short and it loops. you sholdve had the guy beat the shit out of a grop of other guys or somethin for a while or some kind of fight scene and when the ball comes at the screen, you shouldve made it look like the screen cracked then went black.
Hmm... I tryed the crack screen but it sucked horrible... I'll try again!
slick, but not a real submission
Very decent, and if you still consider yourself "new to flash", I'd say it won't be long before you make a pretty killer submission. Can definitely see the potential with this little clip :b
I'm pretty new to flash, this is only my 10th flash, and they're all tests.
The animation was good, however this was just far too short. If you made it much larger, it doesn't even have to contain a plot or more characters, just more length, perhaps something a bit more interesting, then it could be deserving of a much higher score. 6/10
Im making a full length soon, I'll PM you when it's out?
A short film about a park bench
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