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Nov 20, 2008 | 11:39 AM EST
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  • Sketched
    Sketched Animated sketch and improv comedy from a group of L.A. comedians!

Author Comments

Do you ever get tired of the same ol' routine? Super heroes do too.

Here is the second installment of the "Sketched" series. I hope you like.

*Tech note* Sorry about size, every time I tried to compress the audio as an MP3 it would de-sync by the end and a lot of the jokes are time sensitive. If anyone has any insight into this problem or better yet, a detailed solution, a PM would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

Reviews


ZeppelinAlphaZeppelinAlpha

Rated 4 / 5 stars

All in all, very good. I liked the rambling ;D

"Okay, pick one down there, that looks like she might not be a hooker"
"That will be tough!"
XD



EsnEsn

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Missed the mark

It was not as funny as "pregnancy test" for me because that one seemed like it could've been based on a real situation and real people. This one is based on old-TV-show superhero stereotypes. Making fun of something that doesn't actually exist is a bit lame and not nearly as funny.

So my suggestion would be to pick something that more people can recognize from their daily lives next time. "Pregnancy test" was brilliant because it was just plausible, while being exaggerated enough to make me laugh.

The animation's really secondary here, but it seemed fine to me.


sirjeffofshort responds:

Cool, thanks for the review, you have a nack for always making really good points and (thankfully) backing them up with good logic so we know what to work on in the future.

Because we have a number of different writers with different tastes we think it's important to switch things up from scene to scene, and as with most sketch comedy, I expected some of our work to be a bit hit and miss with different groups of people. Coming from a background in comics and illustration, i really responded to the idea of "two super heroes having a conversation about meeting women just as you might expect two people in an office to," when it was pitched, however I do recognize that this idea is a bit more risky since it appeals to a more niche audience than 'pregnancy test' did.

You will definitely see more things akin to "pregnancy test" in the future, but I think it's important to experiment and see what works, elsewise working on these projects would become old hat and feel 'hacky' real quick. It's also important to know what peope respond to and what they don't, so again, thank you for your reviews.


IronGleetIronGleet

Rated 5 / 5 stars

aewesome

That was hilarious... loved it... 10+



MennoniteMafia808MennoniteMafia808

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Mr. Amazing, not so amazing :P

Great flash, mate. Keep up the good stuff.



IrbisIrbis

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

hahahaha :D

hilariouse and MASTER voice acting - total gratz :D