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Nov 17, 2008 | 9:36 PM EST
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READ FAST xD

this is my first flash..and i know it's not that pretty.
but i will appreciate if you comment and rate so i'll know what not to do or what to do when i make another flash..
it's okay if you write rude comments..i just want to know how i'm doing
thanks anyway

Reviews


KelledinKelledin

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Pretty decent for a first flash

Could be some pretty entertaining subject matter, if you lengthened it a bit and gave it more plot. Most of the comments I would offer (preloader, image scaling artifacts, etc.) have been covered already. Just one last friendly nitpick: give credz to 3 Doors Down. I'm all for fair use of a three-second song excerpt, but a lot of ppl might jump down your throat for not giving credit.



2006Neon20062006Neon2006

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

some advice?

preloader, for one heh
you can use a NG preloader, just search for em on the site or ask in the forums where theyre found, im not too sure myself

also, making sure the images fit the stage, it just looks better but theres no mistake black edges, because the images were too thin

its all about appearance, not bad for a first try, bit more of a plot would of helped, but good none the less



HanTippleHanTipple

Rated 3 / 5 stars

hmm

Not bad for a first try, but next time try to have a bit more of a plot and a replay button.
Kinda unrelated, but she dresses like my ex, and that kinda scared me :-p.



animehoundanimehound

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad

not bad for a first flash, however portraying the emo attitude does not still make sense to me. honestly they are nothing more than attention whores. ohhh god i cut myself now feel sorry for me. i dunno maybe its just me. i gotta say however its nice first attempt, better than most ive seen on newgrounds. i look forward to seeing more from you.


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KLLZDCKLLZDC

Rated 4 / 5 stars

pretty nice but...

boy... i dunno why emo cut themselves, if you pay attention you can see a sharp edge i the table where the radio is
now the question is... why
pertty nice drawnings for the first time, and the idea of putting a replay button would save you from everything
subject not explained but easy to comprehend, make sure you put the text easier to read, although you must ve made the animation, saved and re-opened it like a movie file, that's why the quality is so cheesy, and slower text animatin too, you have to replay it a few times to get the idea

overall, good for the first time, keep improving