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Nov 17, 2008 | 9:36 PM EST
  • Underdog of the Week November 19, 2008

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READ FAST xD

this is my first flash..and i know it's not that pretty.
but i will appreciate if you comment and rate so i'll know what not to do or what to do when i make another flash..
it's okay if you write rude comments..i just want to know how i'm doing
thanks anyway

Reviews


therealanimatortherealanimator

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 20, 2008

a good first try

i think this flash has some potential and it deserves underdog of the week i hope to see more of your work carolshki27



L3praL3pra

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 20, 2008

Nice try, good drawings

You are very lucky because you submited your first movie the same day you signed up and you won an award. Aside that you has some talent but you has to practice a lot and focus on different topics. Good luck and dont forget the loader next time. Is easier than it looks.



shoopdawhoop123shoopdawhoop123

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 20, 2008

i cant beleave it

i cant beleave it i know ur learning cuz i read the comments and i found this has the award"underdog of the day" wow nice work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



RulerofChaosRulerofChaos

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 20, 2008

Not bad

Your flash has potential. It has appropriate music and I think your flash has a good idea, showing people how people with low self-esteem or depression, etc. feel on a day-to-day basis. I would only suggest a few things that you could add (they're just simple problems, though, so you've probably heard them before): a preloader, an ending, and a story (not necessarily anything super long, just a bit of storyline and maybe a little background description on your character). I'm saying this mostly because the loop startled me (I thought there was more until I realized it simply looped). Other than that, great job!


carolshki27 responds:

i am planning to put a preloader..i finished the storyline and plus ive also finished making the flash..im just waiting for my uncle to install adobe flash cs4 since i only used movie maker in making this flash..


bigholzkybigholzky

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 19, 2008

Highly Impressive Inaugural Flash

While the lack of a preloader and replay button hinder it somewhat, it seems like plenty of people have told you that already, so just keep learning until you get those techniques down.

As for style, it was good and a bit more unique than usual, albeit rudimentary. If you were to practice on polishing it up just a bit, it would be beneficial.

The music flowed well, and fit the mood of the scenes., and sounds effects would be useless in this type of work.

However, the length of this piece negatively affects it. Were part two a bit longer, it would be great.

However, if this is your first entry, I am sure you will only make better and better submissions. I greatly look forward to the next batch of your work. Keep it up.


carolshki27 responds:

thank u..i will do my best next time