Emo Girl
Credits & Info
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Artist carolshki27
- Uploaded
- Nov 17, 2008 | 9:36 PM EST
- File Info
- Movie
- 2.5 mb
- Underdog of the Week Movie of the Year 2008
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Author Comments
READ FAST xD
this is my first flash..and i know it's not that pretty.
but i will appreciate if you comment and rate so i'll know what not to do or what to do when i make another flash..
it's okay if you write rude comments..i just want to know how i'm doing
thanks anyway
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars November 20, 2008
a good first try
i think this flash has some potential and it deserves underdog of the week i hope to see more of your work carolshki27
Rated 4 / 5 stars November 20, 2008
Nice try, good drawings
You are very lucky because you submited your first movie the same day you signed up and you won an award. Aside that you has some talent but you has to practice a lot and focus on different topics. Good luck and dont forget the loader next time. Is easier than it looks.
Rated 5 / 5 stars November 20, 2008
i cant beleave it
i cant beleave it i know ur learning cuz i read the comments and i found this has the award"underdog of the day" wow nice work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rated 4 / 5 stars November 20, 2008
Not bad
Your flash has potential. It has appropriate music and I think your flash has a good idea, showing people how people with low self-esteem or depression, etc. feel on a day-to-day basis. I would only suggest a few things that you could add (they're just simple problems, though, so you've probably heard them before): a preloader, an ending, and a story (not necessarily anything super long, just a bit of storyline and maybe a little background description on your character). I'm saying this mostly because the loop startled me (I thought there was more until I realized it simply looped). Other than that, great job!
i am planning to put a preloader..i finished the storyline and plus ive also finished making the flash..im just waiting for my uncle to install adobe flash cs4 since i only used movie maker in making this flash..
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 19, 2008
Highly Impressive Inaugural Flash
While the lack of a preloader and replay button hinder it somewhat, it seems like plenty of people have told you that already, so just keep learning until you get those techniques down.
As for style, it was good and a bit more unique than usual, albeit rudimentary. If you were to practice on polishing it up just a bit, it would be beneficial.
The music flowed well, and fit the mood of the scenes., and sounds effects would be useless in this type of work.
However, the length of this piece negatively affects it. Were part two a bit longer, it would be great.
However, if this is your first entry, I am sure you will only make better and better submissions. I greatly look forward to the next batch of your work. Keep it up.
thank u..i will do my best next time