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Ok well, this is my very first Flash I've ever done, so be honest and helpful. Thank you! :D
wow! I didn't expect to give such good feedback, thanks everyone. I really appreciate it all :)
You sure have talent kiddo :DD use it ALOTH ! :D
For your first flash, this was excellent!
Many first time Flash submissions are usually jumbled messes of stick figures and irrelevant music all hastily put together by some twelve year old still trying to figure out how to work Microsoft Paint. This, however, was very well done and if I had to guess it I'd say that the author has had considerable experience working with Flash software. It had a unique style, clean presentation, clear sound, and just overall polish. Outstanding work.
i knew that waz gonna happen.
u try to make it unpredictable and then i predict it.
good job but next time have the bird eat the scary one.
The tough guy was eaten by a cute looking pongster.That was unpredictable.
Did not expect that :P
The pink thingy was sooo cute! What a neat little flash ya got thar :D
well done! - xoxo Complaint
Why thank you! :D
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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