Score: 8

"Again pretty good"

by: Haggard

date: July 28, 2009

After watching this I'm even more confused... but it's a good thing because now I have to watch future episodes as well. This confusion keeps me interested. ;)

I noticed that you now used arrows instead of dots to indicate which character is speaking. Now the speech bubbles LOOK like speech bubbles. Much less confusing than in the first episode where at first I thought the characters where just thinking.

But I noticed some annoying spelling errors like the infamous "there"/"they're" and "your"/"you're" errors. Those can be really easily avoided and will make the flash a lot better if they are avoided. ;)
So, every time you want to write "your" speak out lout the sentence with the words "you are". If it doesn't make sense, then "your" is right. Otherwise you want to type "you're". ;)

The action is again very nice in this flash. I hope you can keep this up.

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Score: 9

"Again, a very good flash"

by: EpicFail

date: July 23, 2009

Storyline: The storyline in the series seems good so far, I think these 2 flashes have been introductions, and eventually all of them are going to find each other and shit goes down. I really am looking forward to seeing the rest of these flashes. 8/10

Art/Animation: Just sprites, not much to say here really. I enjoy them though, you're doing a great job at this series. 7/10

Audio: Great choice of music for this one, really added to the flash, made it better than the other in some ways. Very good. 7/10

Overall: The series is looking better and better each time I see it, I am really really looking forward to this series being complete, and watching the whole thing. 8/10

Score: 6

"Slightly better than the last..."

by: Insanimation

date: July 22, 2009

Art/Animation: 6/10
As I said with the first one, it's just sprites, so I can't award major marks here. You used some nice parallax effects here, and nothing seemed too bad..

Plot/Concept: 7/10
Still nothing absolutely captivating, but I found the Megaman storyline quite interesting..

Audio/Music: 7/10
Still nothing wrong with the audio in terms of ambience and background, but it felt empty, and I really think it needs voice actors..I know froom experience that VAs are fairly easy to find, if you know where to look. If you need a hand getting VAs, PM me.

Overall: 6/10
Slightly better than the previous, but nothing that has grabbed my attention too much yet..

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Score: 8

"Finished it off well"

by: JKMonkey

date: July 22, 2009

I have to say that I liked this second half of your sprite movie more than I liked the first, it seems like you spent a lot more time on this half to develop the characters and make the storyline more interesting.

The audio was good, again it would have been nice if you had added some oice acting to give the characters some spoken dialogue, but other than that the sound affects were good and in very good quality.

Better job with this one man, 4/5 from me, good job! :)

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Score: 9

"Hmmm"

by: Fro

date: July 22, 2009

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Just as good as the first one if not a bit better. Smooth animations and again you had some more advanced stuff rather than the normal sprites that you see from noobs. (Again like me lol)

~ Story/Content ~

I loved how in the beginning you backtracked just a little bit so we could see the other side of a story. That really makes the flash interesting so we can understand why things happened the way they did and really makes it look like you know what your doing when creating a script.

It seems like there is more behind this then just the random invasion and that perhaps some evil character is trying to get rid of all the good sprite characters so it can take over the world or something of that sort. You set it up good so I'll have to watch the next one to find out.

~ Audio ~

Pretty much the same thing I said last time. The sound effects were well timed and the music went well with the animation. Voices might be interesting to try, but I just couldn't see them working in this type of flash.

~ Overall ~

Keep it up you are doing a great job. Perhaps work on the file size a bit though. This one was shorter than the last one, but had a larger file size. Have you been optimizing your audio?

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