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Nov 16, 2008 | 12:54 PM EST

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[translated by sonofkirk]

A shadow is invading the Milkshak Land. It belong to the Masked Avenger, Pennywise godchild, who aims to avenge his godfather attacking the town.

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CoopCoop

Rated 3 / 5 stars November 30, 2008

Interesting

Not a bad little animation, although I would suggest that you don't break the episodes down so much - there is a lot to be said for getting the whole episode into one block. If you look at what has happened with GunChest, for example, there is a lot of detail in those episodes and they are always over the filesize limit, so you've got a lot of stuff that you can do with one 10mB limit.

A nice job, but I would look for the spelling correction - you've missed the final e off of Milkshake a few times, which people do notice, but it's not the be all and end all of the project. If you put that right, it looks like you've got something good going.

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Grimasen responds:

hi, thanks.


HaggardHaggard

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 28, 2008

Nice

This is quite a nice flash. The graphics are very "comical" (as in, as if I was reading some online comic strip), but that's ok. The graphics of the backgrounds however are a bit sloppy. You should try to improve them a bit.

The animations where mostly tweens, which doesn't look that great, especially when the guy "walks", he's just floating. It's pretty hard to animate walking people, but you should try to do so nevertheless. It would greatly improve the quality of the flash.

Too bad that this episode is so short, but I'm looking forward to watch and review the other episode(s), too. :)

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Grimasen responds:

hi, thanks.


FroFro

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 22, 2008

Not bad.

I think the first part with that just has the text needs something like simple background music on it and/or it needs a voice reading what the text says. Without any audio here it may seem sort of dry or boring to the watchers of the flash. Also, perhaps the text stays there for too long. To fix this without making it too fast for slower readers you could put a next button, even though I think the better thing to do would to add a voice reading the text and have the text scroll up the screen so it is easier on the eyes/gives us some animation to watch instead of just reading the old boring text.

Watching the flash itself it is pretty good. The animation and graphics are alright, but still need to be cleaned up a little bit. They are a bit rough and need to be smoother, but they aren't terrible. The story is very bad in this one. I really had no clue what was going on. It was very confusing. There seemed to be some mistakes here and there also like when the sky didn't fully cover the screen and there was black space where the sky should have been.

The audio was alright, but I still think the flash needs to have voices. Perhaps voices could even improve on the story and it wouldn't leave people as confused as what was really going on in the flash.

Overall, I do think that you have a talent with flash, but you also have so much potential to be a really good flash artist. Keep up the good work, work on your animation, story line, and especially getting some voices in your flash and I think they will turn out much better.


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Grimasen responds:

Hi. Thanks. A lot of people think I should put voices, but I don't have the relevant material.


Mags1722Mags1722

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 16, 2008

a little boring

i thought it was boring and didnt know really what was going on much so i give you 5/10 for effort



GregoliniGregolini

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 16, 2008

Yeah... Nice...

Hm, I liked the music and some animations, but the walking cicle and some drawns aren't so cool.
I give you 7/10 for your work, for the music and for some scenes.