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Nov 15, 2008 | 9:11 AM EST

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I started making it in my computer class, out of bordom, it was fun, drawing and making a movie. I am making a part two, and a sprite game. I based his face from the popular Madness series, which i am a huge fan of.

Reviews


sticmahn34sticmahn34

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

WOW

that was really bad, you didn't put any effort into that animation...
You need to practice animating a walk/run cycle and do little animations before you submit anything. try to make your changes in the stickfigure a little smaller, and raise the fps to at least 20



FB-Zer0FB-Zer0

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

well

it was bad. but here's what you can do to improve:

the absolute most important thing for you IMO is add sound. sound effects and music are really important for a good movie

the next thing is work on the artwork. i know drawing on flash isnt the easiest thing but you can do better than that.

finally to improve the animation quality you should add more frames so the animation runs more smoothly. some bits are laggy and it doesnt look very good.

I hope you take these things to heart for i believe someday i could see you on this site as one of the best out there

or you can be like me and after one not so good submission quit and never animate again haha



EmbassyEmbassy

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Mediocre.

I think you could do better. Try adding sound and spending more time on the artwork. Your end product is directly proportional to the amount of effort you put in, so give it your all and keep up the work.



Dutch-SpitfireDutch-Spitfire

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not that bad

It felt like a parody on Madness at some part, I saw a episode of spongebob flying by, and general stickfigurry stuff =P
I think this could be faaaar more interesting if you added sounds and or music to it, now it just feels.. unfinished.
Also, for your 'sequel' you can improve your animation's looks greatly by putting more frames in it, you'll get a better flow.
Lastly, a play button and replay button can be real handy.

Keep it up ;-)


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iWafflesiWaffles

Rated 0 / 5 stars

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I really dont know what to say. Quality is shit, story is shit, andyou didn't even put sound on it! !