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Nov 11, 2008 | 3:33 PM EST

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Author Comments

please be gentel, its my first time...

an short brush stick animation.....

dont be rude people from asia, I hate you!

Reviews


DragaXDDragaXD

Rated 3 / 5 stars November 11, 2008

Wow, good for a first try...

Ok,
Firstly i understand that your primary language may not be English and so you feel more comfortable using Spanish (guess). However your target audience here at newgrounds are mainly English speakers, you have to keep that in mind and keep the majority of your audience in the loop...
Awesome anims for a first submission, the fighting is decent, but not overdone, the ending seemed a bit snapped as if you rushed to finish it. Take your time when making them for a more successful flash, the music was ok, although i am not sure i'd pick the first track for a fight... = /
Lastly, i don't think saying that you hate people in Asia was a smart move, as undoubtably there is an asian community on newgrounds, and frankly saying that without cause or explanation is insulting and unseemly.


Arthurtobastico responds:

i was joking, i'm asian too


DarkReaver13DarkReaver13

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 11, 2008

cool

i liked it very good for a first timer most first times are almost as someones back hurting because they have abnormaly large breasts, but yours was good for a first time animation and also why is it in spanish?


Arthurtobastico responds:

it's potruguese ^^

i know english, but it's in portuguese cause i made it for my website


dx5231dx5231

Rated 3 / 5 stars November 11, 2008

Ah... ótimo. Mais Brasileiros D:

AE MEU VCS JA TEM O ORKUT, TAO QUERENDO DOMINA O NEWGROUNDS TBM? Haha... to zuando. Mas eu tenho visto uma porrada de brasileiro no NG ultimamente. Vc vai ter q colocar os negocio tudo em inglês, se nao os cara do NG vao vota baixo pq nao entenderam. Eu acho tbm q vc devia coloca uma musica melhor. Esssa q ta ai agora nao ta parecendo uma de luta. E vc devia fazer uns balões de fala melhores.
"Eu gosto de peitos" - lol.. Quem nao gosta? :3

I guess I'll have to write that in english as well, so other people can understand what I've said >.>
Well, I think you should make everything in english, so most of the NG members will be able to understand what is written there. The text can be an important part of the movie, cuz sometimes you won't be able to understand the movie it unless you know what's written.
I think you should choose a better song. Ya know, the current one doesn't look like a song you usually hear at a fighting scene.

Oh, just for you guys to know, when a guy says (or think that, w/e) "Eu gosto de peitos", that means "I like boobies" :P



TophatwonderTophatwonder

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 11, 2008

vry nice

so first time, very good job. mine were shitty compared to this for my first time so 10/10. you should finish this. then re submit it.


Arthurtobastico responds:

very tankiu, i love you^^(borat stile)


Nerd-02Nerd-02

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 11, 2008

Very nice animation.

This movie had some fantastic animation and effects, great job. However, the text kind of took away from the movie. I couldn't understanding, it flashed too quickly to read and obstructed the view.

Another thing that was kinda weird were the arrows that flash. I'm guessing you used this to emphasize something, which is a great idea, but I would have used a glow or something instead of just an arrow.

An all around nice flash, especially for your first one. Keep up the great work.