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Chest Boom

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Hello everyone! This is Laugh Most Here's first submission and we are pretty excited about it. We are published weekly in The University of South Florida's newspaper every Thursday, and have been working on a series of animated cartoons for your enjoyment. This cartoon is based off of one of the panel cartoons we made. Although it is short it is meant to guage how are humor is received. ENJOY!!

**UPDATE** Yea guys I'm terribly sorry, I have the sound working now. I was having an insane amount of trouble with the converter. Now I have sound at the beginning but no pre-loader. My files are created as a .mov, do you guys know of any decent mov to swf converters? Thank you so much for your support!!!!

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Decent

The Good:
Artwork is good, better than anything I could produce. However I'd add some color, even if its just solid like the image of the can. The humor is decent but could use work on the delivery.

The Bad:
The voices weren't always clear. I couldn't understand what the guy was saying after he introduced the drink something like "you know nun-uh-nah ***** ***** **** ******* ***** CHEST BOOM' I think it was just a bit quiet. My guess is that he's imitating what your heart does and he's not really saying words.
At the very least put a stop at the end of the movie. Easiest way is to make the last frame a key frame and open up actionscript and type 'stop' (without quotes). Though since this was done in QuickTime and converted, the movie is probably embedded and thus a little more complicated. (guessing at this though)
The image of the can goes by way too fast, though I suppose that's inline with what the can actually does. I took the time to view your site and found the quicktime version which pauses at the end to let you inspect the can. The flash version would be much better if it did this.

The Vote:
2 - While I got the humor, it didn't make me chuckle. However, I think it may have been that I was preoccupied with hearing what was said.

Uh...alright?

I suppose it's just me but I'm not really recepting the hilarity of it all too well. Although the fact that an energy drink sounds quite plausible, the actual flash itself was poorly done and could have had more work on it or at least made it longer/included more jokes/made it more simple for people to understand or something. I would like to view some of your other ideas though!

Eh?

Well i was a good animation but it lacked a few key things.

like a the end frame maybe with a replay button and a preloader

you can get a preloader and easily put it in you dlash in minutes from the submit dlash area

LaughMostHere responds:

yea guys I'm terribly sorry. I was having an insane amount of trouble with the converter. Now I have sounmd at the beginning but no pre-loader. My files are created as a .mov, do you guys know of any decent mov to swf converters? Thank you so much for your support

Theres an audio malfunction...

In the beginning, the audio can't be heard. I dont think its my computor seeming as it is new. I only got the part where he introduces the energy drink. That part was funny i'll admit. Please fix this first however. Keep rockin\m/

Psst

It works better when all the sound is working. Sorry, but I'll have to give it a zero until all of it works out..

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Score
2.42 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 10, 2008
7:54 PM EST