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This is my second flash animation I have ever made ~ yay <3! I hope you enjoy it ^______^
The story was actually rather interesting. I'm sure with some practice you could move well beyond stick figures.
But you must learn the art of using a preloader, young grasshopper. Try here: http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/
But you did well. 6/10.
Weird but it was actually kind of good. This is one of those tough movies to judge, it has a great story, and pretty good animation, humor. The art is just sloppy. It really brings the whole thing down. I understand that not all of us are great artist, I suck at drawing too :P, but there are ways. You can trace things, or use sprites. I'd suggest tracing for you just because of the way you animate.
A nice background probably would have made a big difference. Some green grass, pale blue mountains in the BG, a tiny sun far away. Just a soft BG. But it would have made this movie look a lot more polished. The white BG really took away from the quality.
Overall, great story and animation, but you loose marks on presentation.
Second flash animation ever?
I gotta give it to ya, nice job for a 2nd.
Some of the animation was a little slow (like when she kicked the rock, or whatever it was), but overall it was pretty smooth.
Plus...lol, sword fighting with rigor mortic bodies...^^
NOTHING LOADEDEDED! My internets are gay, so it might of been just me, but, if that wasnt the case, and you actually submitted a white sheet to newgrounds, i say: YOU SUCK SO BAD YOU STUPID ASS WHY WOULD YOU OFFEND ME LIKE THAT-- and so forth,
but im sure you have a heart...
If ironing saves lives...
Then my grandmother is some sort of superhero... oh and I absolutely despised your soundtrack.
A short film about a park bench
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